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名师对SAT考试9分作文分段点评第二篇(3)

2015-05-21 20:06:09来源:网络

  新东方在线为大家整理了名师对SAT考试9分作文分段点评第二篇的相关内容,供考生们参考,以下是详细内容。

  第二个主体段:

  Also people move to another community can changed themselves and begin their new life style.

  Topic sentence以also开头,和第一个开头段形成自然的过渡衔接。

  I study in an American school. In our school, there is a boy called Mork and he comes from a public school in our state. Last year he came to our city and entred our school.

  指出主人公从一处迁往另一处。

  Before, he studied in a public school. He told me the students at there did not study really hard and the teachers did not teach them some knowledge. In this way, his GPA was very low and just above 2.0. Also, some of the students fight with each other and hurt him.

  在以前的学校,他的学习和生活方面都很糟糕。

  After he came to our city and entred our school, the teachers helped him a lot on his homework and review sheet. Some students tutor him and help him to raise his GPA. At the end of this year, he became the top 10 of our junior class and his GPA was 3.9. He became happier and more out going than before.

  来到另外一个学校后,他的学习环境发生了很大变化,学习成绩提高了,幸福感也增强了。

  相比上一个主体段,这个段落是个人的例子,故事的情节虽然比较简单,但是也基本能够支撑作者的观点。

  以上就是新东方在线为大家总结的名师对SAT考试9分作文分段点评第二篇的相关内容,希望对大家有所帮助,最后预祝大家在SAT考试中取得优异的成绩!

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