新SAT写作解析:大力宣传非法象牙贸易伤害

2016-11-15 16:38:32来源：网络

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　　We suggest a different approach. We should encourage China, where much of the poached ivory ends up, to start a detailed public education campaign that underscores the damage done to elephant populations by the illegal trade in ivory. We also need more aggressive enforcement of anti-poaching efforts in Africa. And we should figure out a way to manage the trade in raw ivory to protect elephants. For instance, several years ago, ivory stockpiles owned by several African countries were sold in a series of United Nations-approved auctions in an effort to undercut illegal ivory trafficking. The proceeds went to elephant conservation efforts. This is a better approach than destroying these stockpiles, as the United States did last fall to six tons of ivory.

　　写作手法

　　solution proposal(提供解决方案)、first person plural(第一人称复数)、parallelism(平行结构)、example(举例子)

　　原文解析

　　作者在前文中虽然提及了新条例的很多弊端，营造了一种恐怖氛围(fear-evoking appeals)，但是在文章结尾处，作者为读者和决策者提供了几种从根本上阻止偷猎大象行为的方案，从而燃起了读者心中对未来的希望。同时，作者采用第一人称复数，激发读者共同保护大象，打击非法盗猎的责任感。

　　高分表达

　　1. By providing solutions, the authors reassure the readers that there are alternative ways to stop poaching without bringing inconvenience to musicians, collectors, antique dealers and gun owners.

　　2. The authors offer hope at the end by suggesting a different approach may end trafficking at source.

　　3. The authors use personal pronoun such as “we” to give readers a sense of shared responsibility./…to stress the collective responsibility.

　　参考译文

　　我们建议采取另一种措施。我们应该敦促中国(象牙制品的主要流入国)开展详细的公众教育活动，大力宣传非法象牙贸易对象群的伤害。我们还应该在非洲加大对偷猎的行为的打击力度。为了保护象群，我们应该寻求一条管理象牙原料交易的途径。例如，几年前，为了打击象牙走私，联合国曾批准举办一系列象牙拍卖会，非洲好几个国家的象牙库存都通过拍卖会对外销售，拍卖所得用来资助保护大象活动。比起像美国去年秋天销毁6吨象牙的行为，这是一种更好的处理方式。

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