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2018-03-27 12:22:54来源:网络

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  Amanda M. A final illustration of the notion thatplans may go wrong is seen through my experiencein my community service group. Last spring I washead of the entertainment and activities committeein the Moraga Youth Involvement Committee. Wedecided that it would be fun to plan a movie nightfeaturing, The Incredibles, in the Moraga CommonsPark on a weekend in late May. As a group we beganplanning the event early March gathering donationsfor the concession stand, finding a projection screen and sound system, and making surethat our event was publicized well to gather a promising crowd. Everything was in order andready to go the day of the event when my commissioner received a phone call from anemployee from Disney. The Disney employee explained that in order to show a film producedby Disney we needed to sign a $500 release form two weeks prior to the event. Unfortunatelywe had been unaware of the form and were forced to cancel the event. Even though we werecertain that the event was a sure success, we skipped a very important detail in order to makethe night become a reality.

  点评:Amanda在本段中讨论的是现实世界中的经济问题,有很多令人印象深刻的细节。句子结构很丰富,过渡词用得也很巧妙。我喜欢她一开始用“我”,然后迅速扩展成了“我们”,这样就把一段个人经历的含义扩大了。

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