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　　Bad Intros:

　　1. Ladies and gentlemen of the College Board …

　　2. What would Jesus do? .。。

　　3. Once upon a time …

　　4. “Failure is the mother of success!!!” …

　　By the way, I have actually seen these introductory phrases written by real students. Please, don’t make the same mistake。

　　Step 4 (1 minute)

　　Complete your introduction.Now spend a minute or so completing your introductory paragraph. Make sure you write at least two sentences but no more than three, as you’ll run out of time。

　　My version:For example: Honesty is crucial to build and maintain trust. Several examples from literary works and current events clearly demonstrate that honesty always prevails。

　　That’s it. Two sentences are good enough for the SAT essay. I am not saying don’t write more, but there is no need to write five to six sentences. It’s important that you move on since you only have 25 minutes to complete a full-length essay. Remember! This is not your typical school essay, in which you have to develop your thesis and write your thesis at the end of your introductory paragraph. The SAT essay does not work that way. You must get straight to the point, answer the prompt/question, and move on to your examples. That’s the only way you’ll finish on time. Also, it is important to remind you that readers/graders know that you were given only 25 minutes to complete your essay. They will be lenient and not penalize every grammatical error. Readers/graders, however, will penalize you for excessive patterns of spelling and grammar errors – I mean … who wouldn’t?

　　Step 5 (1 minute)

　　Write your transitional thesis:.It is time to introduce your first example. Avoid being abrupt. Start with a transitional phrase that will smoothly transition from your introduction to your body paragraph 1.

　　Here are some recommended transitional phrases:

　　1. As demonstrated by …

　　2. As shown by …

　　3. In the novel 1984 by George Orwell, …

　　4. In the film Metropolis by Fritz Lang, …

　　5. Through the actions of …

　　6. Description, …

　　Then you have to add a modified version of your thesis. You need to add your example and blend it with your thesis to make it more relevant。

　　For example: In the novel 1984 by George Orwell, Winston’s rebellious thoughts/actions are direct results of the party’s deceptive/dishonest political tactics。

　　Step 6 (2 minutes)

　　Use accelerated plug-in 1.+This is where the 80:20 Rule really shines. Now that you have pre-researched and memorized all details related to your example(s)， it’s time to make full use of them and plug them in to build volume and persuasive content. Give yourself two minutes to write at least six sentences of pure supportive details/content. Of course, all details/content must be relevant to the prompt! If not, you are padding; that will get you not a zero, but somewhere in the 2-4 range. 4

　　Important: Make sure you pepper your plug-in with some statistics, full names, and dates – a sure tactic to impress your graders。

　　AWFUL: “Students should not play PS3 because my mom told me so!”

　　BAD: “Students should avoid playing PS3 because I play it three to four hours a day and my GPA is 2.5”

　　OKAY: “Students should avoid playing PS3 as it may lead to a lower GPA, dependency/addiction to gaming, and distraction from other important activities/duties。”

　　GOOD: “According to the National Behavioral Research Center (NBRC)， students who play PS3 for more than an hour a day will likely develop a Game Dependency Syndrome, which will negatively affect students’ GPAtheir chances of getting into college。

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