【托福写作机经】2024年7月13日托福考试回忆

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　　2024年7月13日的托福考已经成为回忆，新东方在线SAT考试网为大家整理了此次考试的托福写作机经，让我们一起来回顾和分析这次的写作考查内容。

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　　综合写作

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主题：美国目前面临大约20000名初级保健医生的短缺问题
1.医学教育的学费非常昂贵，许多医学生背负着高额的学生贷款。然而，初级保健医生相比于专科医生的收入较低，这使得许多医学生不愿意选择成为初级保健医生。	1.政府和相关项目正在提供支持，包括帮助医学生找到工作并给予经济支持，以减轻他们的经济负担。此外，还有计划资助愿意到边远地区工作的医学生，帮助他们偿还贷款并提供奖学金。
2.初级保健医生的工作量和工作压力较大。与专科医生相比，他们通常工作时间更长，上班时间更早，下班时间更晚，休假时间也更少。	2.通过提高护士的技能水平并招聘更多的护士，以分担初级保健医生的工作压力。由于护士也接受了全面的培训，随着他们可承担的工作范围不断扩大，可以更好地协助医生的工作。
3.医学毕业生在毕业后需要进行为期三年的住院医师培训，但住院医师的培训机会有限，且这些培训机会往往集中在偏远地区的医院，这进一步降低了初级保健医生岗位的吸引力。	3.针对住院医师培训岗位分配不均的问题，国家将通过立法进行调整。如果某家医院在几年内持续有空缺的培训岗位，这些岗位将被重新分配到其他医院，以实现更公平的资源分配。

　　学术讨论

　　Your professor is teaching a class on. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.

　　In your response, you should

　　· express and support your personal opinion

　　· make a contribution to the discussion in your own words

　　An effective response will contain at least 100 words. You have ten minutes to write.

　　Doctor Diaz:Imagine that you have just given a presentation to your classmates or coworkers, and you want to know how well you performed. Which one of the following would better help you learn from your weaknesses (mistakes) and improve your skills for your next presentation? Why?

　　-Watching a recording of your presentation and working by yourself to identify your weaknesses

　　-Having classmates or coworkers who attended your presentation identify your weaknesses and discuss them with you.

　　Kelly:Watching a recording of your presentation and working by yourself to identify your weaknesses.

　　Andrew: Having classmates or coworkers who attended your presentation identify your weaknesses and discuss them with you.

　　范文：

　　I contend that having classmates or coworkers identify and discuss one’s weaknesses after a presentation can be incredibly beneficial for improving his or her skills. The primary reason is that this feedback allows individuals to gain valuable insights into areas where they may need to improve, thus providing a unique opportunity for growth and development. The experience of Max, one of my best friends, acts as a compelling example for this concept. After he gave a presentation in front of the class, they pointed out that he tended to speak too quickly and that it was difficult to follow his train of thought. This feedback was incredibly valuable as it made him aware of a weakness that he hadn't noticed before. Therefore, he was able to work on slowing down his speaking pace and organizing his thoughts more clearly for his next presentation. In conclusion, this story reaffirms the notion that feedback from others led to a person becoming a more effective and confident presenter.